You can be the ground beneath my feet and I shall be all the ground that you need…(Ground beneath her feet, Rushdie)
And that is exactly what I thought I had read in those earnest eyes .
But look, I am on a swing now and even though you pulled away, I don’t have to worry about falling into a pitless void any more…
15 comments:
amidst the trickle of the blood
of my heart at the loss of my soul, my love
i am on the ground
writing your name with the ink of my blood
ceasing existance an inch each moment
i smile at your name
being dragged into the annals of death
eU say soo much even in the little that u've written in this post..
After a long time i'm here..
Thanks for dropping by... The favour is returned.. :)
thought provoking post...
Am moved.
p.s. Gud book by rushdie btw.
pRitesh->Well!well!well!
Akhil->Buddy,its time i took a hiatus
Lazy strokes->Welcome
Passerby->Thanks buddy.But thats the end of the road for me,time to fly away from the blogworld...i've been here for nearly a yr...and its time i closed shop.
Φ->I am going to miss you....u were one of the most loyal blogger friends i've ever had.Sigh...im going to quit the blog world...
y d f*** u wanna cHanGe dIrecZTiOn oF uR waVez? ther are people on shore who waits for ur waves..u brIng 2 dEm essnce of life ,
comoN pAl..u write beautiful stuffs. u got a bful mind and genius mind ..u knw how to play wid words and how to place dem beautifully and in cipher.
jesussssssss.........i cn't blv dis..no no u not gonna leave this world...aaahhhh Gawd..
tusssi jaa rahey ho...tusi mat jao :(
i hope..i will get some water here iin dry summer of IndIA..dey say mOnsooon too will b delayed wid less rain...and here u too going ..hmmmmm...iNdia and blogsphere both gonna suffer dis summer!
Nirvana->R-e-l-a-x...and then read your comment box.Happy?
something in the economy of this piece that is both charming and alarming. a minimalist wordplay that evokes passion and provokes thought effortlessly.
I don't know what pushed you to such an extent sweet heart, but I never thought in a faceless land parting would be this painful.
When you seek solace in words, seperation as reaper prys in, to lasso one away from another..
Leave this mutiny of thoughts untouched, let me at least be reminded of a once iridescent rainbow..
Keep visiting..
facesles.world.anonymous.friends.
fake.emotions.fake response.
cyber farewell.real pain.
death of another gr8 blog!
death of another NEO of Blog mAtrIx, where every 1 keeps searchng for a good blogger messiah..who can touch there real emotions with cyber text..hopz this NEO too getz re-incarnated or watever born again...
hopes will catch u again mermaid..mebbe in another ocean!
The last sigh....
or do you
Death->Or do i? what da ya mean,my friend?
So much is said..in such few words..that it churns my heart somewhere inside..
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